In this awesome design of things you'll receive a B- just for effort and hard work. Where you lost me was first in all the details. You know, as the maxim goes, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true in this article. Having said that, let me tell you just what exactly did work. The writing is definitely incredibly engaging which is most likely why I am taking the effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, despite the fact that I can notice the jumps in logic you make, I am not necessarily confident of how you seem to connect the points which in turn make the actual final result. For the moment I will yield to your point but trust in the near future you actually link the facts much better.