In this awesome pattern of things you actually receive a B+ with regard to effort. Where you actually lost everybody was first in your specifics. As they say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be much more accurate right here. Having said that, permit me tell you what did work. The text is quite persuasive and that is probably why I am taking an effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, whilst I can certainly see the leaps in logic you make, I am not necessarily sure of how you appear to unite the details that help to make the final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your issue but trust in the near future you actually link your dots much better.